I have many wall decorations in my room ranging from many colours such as black, red, white, green, blue, pink and yellow. Like maybe a gigantic , SHE HULK!, or maybe not but I love my room with all those fancy accessories. A few things to fix up but over all it was good. It is literally a big, black dust nursery because its elevated to nearly touching the roof and Im short. The pattern is bad, It is a circle and 2 squiggly lines that run beside it and keep doing the same thing until it reaches the roof. Like I do my homework on my desk. Excellent punctuation and spelling. The only thing thats in there is a couple of dresses I never wear and some picture frames that my mum forgot to take out when she moved rooms. And now for the couch The one thing I hate about my room and cant get rid of it. I love this painting because of the colours and the way the artist has paid attention to detail. How lovely it is to read what Hannah thinks about her room. By Bridget Smith. Curtains and carpet are the same grey colour, but the carpet is so soft you could sleep on it. As Ive already said I have a painting of Clifton Beach hanging above my bed, it is landscape and the colours combinations are awesome. My carpet is quite old and has some stains on it from the previous, but most of my bed covers those stains.Some of my clothes are squashed up in my small drawers and most of good clothes are in my wardrobe. I have to share my room with two other people and its kind of small in width. Love Mum x. DOOGIES BEDROOM My most special thing in my bedroom is my glowing dragon it isnt very big but it lights up at night time and gives a bright glow of rainbow colors. Across from that is an immense window, and finally, a built in wardrobe, containing various unfolded garments. Room Metaphors and Similes. I have two paintings in my room, one of a cat with glasses on and one of two dogs in a mug (these still need to be put up). With blue sheets on it and a big pink and blue duvet. I like how you have used lots of descriptive words. Jackson 2x4 Auto Darkening Lens, Although there are many flaws in my room, Im still tolerating them. Then a little bit more right you will see a king size bed with a star wars duvay cover and black pillows. Metaphor for a messy room crossword clue. The mirror in my room is attached to my sister's dresser, around the edges of it has stickers that are half pulled off. My favorite things in my room are the pink wallpaper, the cool view outside my window because there are lots of cool trees and my bed's really comfortable because it has a soft mattress, there is also a cool windowsill that you can sit on and look at those beautiful trees. The bit that gets me, is how can one person be so messy?! On the door it has my name (Will) and other things I made in hard materials. Needs work on the punctuation. My room has a fresh air smell and, in the morning you can hear the birds chirping outside, if you were to walk into my room it would be clean and tidy just the way I like it. I think your room is very descriptive James, I think you did a good job on this description. In general, one might get the idea that metaphors are preferred to describe a bad user experience rather than a good one. Ano ang Imahinasyong guhit na naghahati sa daigdig sa magkaibang araw? A metaphor for home explains your feelings about your home by using figurative language. Sometimes I come home and I see the floor for once because my Mum hates the mess I make in the room. As I creep through the messiness there begins a pile of lego pieces on the grey dull carpet waiting for someone to stand on it and be be pricked. I strolled down the hallway to my room on the right. My room is a good place to enjoy yourself. Also you repeat a lot of your facts over and over again, making this writing boring to read as I am just reading the same writing again and again. At the back of my room there is a large window exposing the magnificent mountains covered in a blanket of snow, my other window gives a happy view of a fence which we share with our neighbour. Now another thing about my room is that it is never clean well unless mum cleans it but there's always something on the ground like a lunch box or cloths mostly cloths. This is placed in the left hand corner underneath my window. In conclusion I love my room as it has a great view, is a good size, my bed is amazingly comfy and the colours are awesome. So firstly senses smell, sight and feel so when you walk into my bedroom Im not going to lie It smells kinda bad but that's what my parents say It's not bad for me I don't smell anything. The color of it is a creamy vanilla look but its actually a bright yellow. My bed is the most comfortable and cosy thing in my whole entire room. Well done!!! Well done. Sometimes I don't even have enough space to use my massive laptop because all my pens and books and rubbish are in the way.I need to give it a good clean. It has a dark theme and it has black sheets and gray covers. 3+. Next to that there is 2 shelfs about 1 meter long one is 30 centimeters higher than the other the bottom one is black and the top one is white and on top is legos that I built when I was young. Overall I am hoping my parents will be convinced that my room needs a change like some new sheets on my bed, some colour on the wall and to get rid of that useless desk. My bed is NEVER made properly, (unless mum makes it for me.) Continue useing very good punctuation and spelling. My bed takes up about one quarter of my room and is stationed next to the northern wall of my room. Sen. Lindsey Graham cruises to reelection in S.C. Hickenlooper beats Gardner for Colo. Senate seat, 'Hamilton' star changes lyrics of song for voters, Trump signals he won't try to declare victory prematurely, Ex-NBA star Eddie Johnson dies at 65 in prison, Expert: A Biden win could lead to mask mandate, testing, Clothing items that may get you turned away from the polls, Jerry Jones: DiNucci's 1st NFL start was 'a lot for him', How Georgias blue drift changes politics nationwide, Battle intensifies over which votes will count. The bed is the main part of any bedroom because that's where everyone spends the most time. My room has an area where I keep drawing and pictures, an area for me to keep my collections. You may find me laying there reading a book in the natural light coming through my window, which is my main source of light. I look up at the ceiling and see a spider in the corner. Nicely described George, your room is currently a blank canvas so you can do a lot with it. I try make my room a beach theme because I love going to the beach. Its a blue 3 person couch with blue, red, and green lines all [around the couch and it unfolds into a king size bed when unfolded. It lies to the left of the monitor on the desk and is covered with old homework and empty cups. I think your writing has really improved this year. In my room there can sometimes be a lot of space when my room is clean but when it is untidy there is literally not space because of the stuff on the floor. You spelt it as color (the American way). Old messy modern and not cared about is the first and foremost idea of the room. Next to my bed is a brown wooden three drawer bedside cabinet which has edges that have been chewed on by dogs. You might walk through all the different scenes of people playing and say, wow, my home has become a playground today!. I am confused about what self fun is though. Inspirational messages can be viewed on plaques, saying things such as dream, see beauty in everything, or friends are the family we choose for ourselves. The word believe is arched across the door to my wardrobe. Mollys Bedroom The thing i treasure is my lego bin because it contains my cool creations. it has a good layout and the furniture is nice. I think it is awesome you describe things in you bedroom so well and I saw it so clear in my head. The room feels incredibly spacious because of the high ceilings, fitted with chandelier-like light fixtures The walls are not just straight and boring as they have little alcoves that are useful for tucking away furniture neatly. Behind the white table theres a cupboard that I dont use instead I put my clothes in drawers in front of my bed. JAMES BEDROOM But some of the stuff in my room is going to sold so I can make more space. I am sure that I will add tons more in the future. But sometimes it doesn't stay clean. Tattoo Aftercare Saniderm, Examples of Popular Metaphors All the worlds a stage, and all the men and women merely players. William Shakespeare I am the good shepherdand I lay down my life for the sheep. The Bible, John 10:14-15 All our words are but crumbs that fall down from the feast of the mind.Khalil Gibran your bedroom is like the inside of your head (simile). The detective listened to her tales with a wooden face. To the right of my bed is my set of wood stained brown patterned drawers with my guitar up against them. But this is a bad thing for me because my bed is as you know against a window which means freezing water goes into my covers at night. In the corner an old dark glory box to go with the old wooden jewelry box upon the set of draws. You needed to double check your punctuation and spelling as there are quite a few mistakes when it comes to these areas. you have a done good job with your spelling and punctuation. The cleanliness of my room is not so good. But the thing I love the most about my bedroom is is the fact that it is mine. Underneath by clip board I have small shapes of watermelon bunting. For example, a child who loves to be out playing on the streets but needs to be indoors by 5pm might come home and say: Its a prison in here! Im proud to call it mine. Separating my sister and I is a large divider, that holds all of my adored books and other well-used items. She has described most of the furnishings. It also depends of mine and Sams moods. How long will the footprints on the moon last? My bed is on the right hand side of my door, and when I wake up the sun is shining in my eyes because the window is opposite to my bed. The box has a wind up handle on the back which plays a gentle, musical melody. There is a slight problem with my room. On the other side of my bed there is a desk which is blue and has glass as its main part. I would also like change the style of my bedroom, mostly the size. It can survive an entire month of cleanliness before succumbing to the fall of clothes and chocolate wrappers. Around the corner from my desk there is a window bay couch that is navy blue, across from the couch there is my Aqua chair covered in rugs and pillows. I have been in your room but I think you have to clean your room before a gest gets there a ha ha 4. On the wall is a black outlined photo frame with photos of me and my family and our holiday to Australia. Penultimate par5agraph the full stop at the end goes inside of the brackets. So my bed is messy, but in general my room isnt all that messy. Good descriptive words & keen to help you clean & rearrange anytime. Floor, Where is it?, Under the bed, in my wardrobe. I have food wrappers on the floor beside my bed. But on the other hand you could of give more ideas and elaborate more on the topic and it would be a better description. R5. Interesting imagination Teatukura. Good work a nice peace of writing. But the worst thing about having a messy room is the feeling that you have of dreading about actually cleaning it. what is commonly misdiagnosed as pink eye. Well, kind of - there isnt a set theme but there is a lot of stuff from the beach. Thanks for dropping by. Your writing paints a picture in the readers mind and leaves them feeling like they actually just physically walked around it! R4. I also enjoy the way that my room is positioned and how it looks (when it's tidy). The set up in my room. I have 3 words to describe my dutches brown, soft, wooden it has five drawers 2 side by side then 3 long ones below each other. My desk Accessories are cool , funky and a little bit expensive but all of these different accessories just add to make my bed room mine. When in my room, its as though you are separated from the rest of the house, because it is much more colourful and decorative. My favorite place in the whole house, my space, my pride and joy, my happy place where I spend most of my time. However you could of used more of it like putting commas in longer sentences. Now my bedroom has amazing accessories such as the the useful charger plug built into the wall! TROYS BEDROOM Where has it gone, well if you moved any of the clothes you'd see it because most of the time my humongous pile of absolute junk makes the floor camouflage like it's ready to go out hunting.The mess,I swear it's never ending. I suck creamy cock. Next step is to read it over to correct punctuation like needed and unneeded capitals and use of commas. Not quite how I see your room - it is a typical boys bedroom with a LOT of mess on the floor and you also forgot to say that you chuck stuff under your bed as well as the "random drawers"! The place that I hang out in, do homework and well of course, sleep. You might go to a spa retreat or meditation retreat to escape from the world and get some relaxation. The touch, it's soft, smooth and warm at night. MY BEDROOM In my room I have a cactus and a succulent plant on my bedside table. My rooms walls are two different colours. Your vocabulary is really cool, but I think that you could have some more adjectives. My half of the bedroom is on the east side of the house, meaning that Im directly in front of one of our three gardens. In my room I have a blue, round mat that my cat likes to sleep on. My room is very minimalistic because of the black and white design. I have two windows in my room one facing straight ahead of you as you walk in and the other one above the bed. I love my room because you can just sit and read and just play. Her eyes were diamonds. You might say that your home is a workplace or an office if you or your parents seem to always be working from home. As you walk up the old skinny hallway, at the end, opposite the bathroom, you will find a bedroom,which you'd agreed looks like a bomb has gone off and spread all the junk everywhere, and yes its my bedroom, possibly the messiest in the house. 4-Because you had good adjectives. Very detailed story and I loved the descriptive vocabulary you used in it (words like alcove). State of my Bedroom.The state of my bedroom is well atrocious there's a mountain there and a another one over there. November 2016 My clothes they are scattered all around my room you can hardly see the flour and most of them aren't washed. You had very descriptive vocabulary and there was a lot of adjectives and that made it very interesting. They will use and expand upon it again and again within creative writing and narrative writing topics, and there are so many ways to get those creative juices flowing. This grants me access outside whenever I need it, especially if it's for a little alone time. 3, Great description Hayden, you forgot to mention the constant piles of washing in it! She was fairly certain that life was a fashion show. Finally I have color so most of my room is a cream color because my walls and roof it that color. Also I have light pink checked sheets. This was both literal and metaphorical in the movie Shrek where the ogre Shrek lived in a swamp. This layout works really well for me. On my shelf there are wooden airplanes that I have designed and made with my granddad that can tell you I like woodwork. 2. as far apart as the poles. Another thing I liked is the spelling is very accurate and you described your bedroom well. The wardrobe is the oldest piece of furniture in my room it was there when the house was built which was a long time ago. Everything in my bedroom is a similar colour and I love the look of my bedroom when you walk into it. I really liked your description about your bedroom. Thirdly, the colors. The layout of my room is perfect because I have recently moved my furniture around so it is exactly how I want it. 7. as broad as Heavens expanse. I can count around 30 pieces of paper, old, stray certificates, none used or cared for. There are plenty of possible metaphors for home. For next time you could use more vocabulary and try not to repeat words. Theres room to improve. Then your eyes are carried to my dark coloured wooden dresser underneath the back window to the left. now I am going to move on to the style. 3, You did spell some difficult words. So my layout might be tight, but it works for me. Sometimes I play music from my bluetooth speaker and my brother comes in and screams and dances along to the music. You might use this metaphor if your brother and sister just argued all day long. A metaphor is a figure of speech that describes an object or action in a way that Also, nice use of punctuation and paragraphs. When you walk into my bedroom you will see three different colours starting at the entrance and going all the way through the room. Your spelling was mostly correct there were just a few words like duvet. I liked some of the words you used like; zooming, convenient and belongings. I am fond of the fact that it is my own place, and that everything is just right. Someone who doesnt like being at home might call it a prison. Over by the side of the wall is my birth certificate that is framed and it tells me the meaning of my name where it originated from and a paragraph about who I am and stuff about me. I love my room just the way it is, I even love the modern color's. Overall I think my room is an amazing space and deserves a lot more love and cleaning to keep it in peak condition. If you go into My room you will probably think it's really big and very messy, and the first thing you will see is the pink wallpaper and the rips and sellotape on the walls. I did the wrong thing. Next time just maybe double check spelling. 3. as ancient as the sun. They make their stories real by allowing us to experience Good description of your bedroom (mess and all). My bedroom is a forest, heaps of clothes scattered on the floor is the Don't forget punctuation. On the far side of my room is an old desk that needs getting rid of because all it does is collect dust. In my room there are lots of clothes and stuff on the floor my room is very messy, and it is hard to get around without stepping on something if I want to do something in it I have to clean it, also on hot days it can be very hot and sometimes it can be really cold when it is rainy and windy. But you a lot of descriptive words. Is your bedroom like mine dirty and smelly. It may be the second smallest room in the house but Im proud to call it mine.This style of bedroom works well for me and fits me perfectly. size: the room was as small as a box. 10 metaphors to describe a place. MY BEDROOM I also enjoy the posters in my room, they describe who I am inspired by and what I also like. Your story was very descriptive and had good describing words. My wardrobe layout has all my shoes which i only have two pairs, hanging up are all my nice clothes. I have fairy lights that are pink and gold, my desk is blue while my chair is a lime green. There isnt tonnes of furniture in my bedroom but I make it work with the room I have, I had the idea of a cabin bed so that i can fit some stuff under it rather than having it crammed up somewhere else. SOPHIES BEDROOM Does my room have a theme? My light blue/turquoise duvet has a really soft and warm feeling to it. A metaphor for a bedroom could be, " His bedroom is like a sauna since the air conditioner broke." Don't fix up anything that's awesome. Feed-forward - You didn't put as much detail as you should've and there was a few spelling mistakes, you need to put a bit more detail and go over it to make sure you haven't got any spelling mistakes. This final piece of text will be explaining the lighting. I have got posters on all the walls in my room and they almost cover up my well one of my walls. 3rd paragraph "one of them are a full size katana" should be There is the washing machine and all the dirty clothes from the laundry in my room because our new house is very small. This is the place I go to when I have to go to bed or to just chill. I agree that it needs to be cleaner! Expand on your punctuation so your not using the classics to much. Even though my drawers, desk, bedside table, curtains and walls are all white. This is the exact opposite of the earlier metaphor saying that your home is a workplace. Some people might call this theme a colourful mess, but I think otherwise. The layout of the room has a facing direction pointing at the north east with side on single beds one near the huge closets and one across near the sliding windows for the sun to enter. you could add some more descriptive words, Angus your punctuation was good but your spelling had a couple of 'i's in stead of a I. must suck cock. My bed is normally scorching hot from the electric blanket. Every room needs furniture to make it yours and in my room the most important piece of furniture is my bed. My bedroom. But I like it because I can change the room around to the way I like it. The paddock sometimes has sheep in it. In my room there are lots of things to use like bop it and stuff like that. So over all the 4 main things that i love about my room are style , layout ,accessories and furniture. But on the drawer top is a bit of mess, it holds my phone, a book, ipod and my lamp and behind my bed on my wall I have some posters. Very descriptive though - well done! These windows have a beautiful view in spring when all of the flowers have bloomed. My grandma got me a gold bracelet with a W on it from Spain. There's really not much sound in my room at all, it's quiet and if you're lucky you can hear the animals outside. You used a lot of good descriptive words to express your bedroom. I love my room and no one's going to get rid of that! My bed has a wooden bed frame that comes up tall where my head is and not so tall where my feet are. 4-. I liked how you took the audience on a trip around your room. Sometimes you cant hear anything because Im sleeping or the sound on my ipod is turned off. My bedside table is cream with a draw that is woven and basket like. But the floor is not the messy thing in my room my wardrobe is, my wardrobe is where all the dirty clothes are that I can't be bothered to put away, when I have to tidy my room so I just put them in my wardrobe. 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